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Don’t Discard Me Yet: The Cry of the Unborn


you know I’m tied to you
bread and wine I share with you
and I know this feeling is new
that you bear life within
that I bug even your skin

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but does it mean,
that you can’t give me a chance?
to show you love at least this once?
I know he took part in this and left
or they ganged up and did some theft
but you see mama, not my fault
I didn’t chose to be in you

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so these months.. they aren’t few
please don’t discard me yet
do your best, place your bet
that I’m a bundle of joy not pain
when you hold me you’ll see and feel
the warmth in my eyes, my innocence

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you will realize, by my presence,
that you’re just as blameless
and together shall we take steps
one, two at a time
we shall be each other’s shine
just don’t discard me yet.

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40 responses to “Don’t Discard Me Yet: The Cry of the Unborn”

  1. Superb! I am speechless. loved the photos. Unable to open photo source site.

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    1. I’m sorry, all of them? I got them from google and I think I forgot to set it to open the link on different page. will see what I can do

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    2. Never mind! Its cool.

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  2. creativeenvision Avatar
    creativeenvision

    Lovely lines Beautiful.

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  3. Bought tears. Thanks for sharing.

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      1. Sorry for making your tear glands strain๐Ÿ˜‚

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  4. Reblogged this on The Searchlight and commented:
    So pointed and graphic, representing the cry of the unborn. This poem speaks volumes.

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      1. My pleasure, friend.

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  5. Great message in a catchy poem.

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    1. Thanks for these encouraging words๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. You’re welcome, friend.

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  6. That was so beautiful and heartwarming. Thank you for sharing this with us. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thank you for being around. You’re highly valued

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      1. So are you. Stay safe and healthy. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜€

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  7. parikhit dutta Avatar
    parikhit dutta

    This is beautifully written ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thanks for this beautifully comment. You’re golden

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  8. Beautifully penned ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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  9. Touching lines indeed

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  10. Woah!!! I literally got a heartache
    Beautiful poem…

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    1. Oops!๐Ÿ˜‚ I hope you healed

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      1. yeah almost it still aches a little ๐Ÿ™‚

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      2. I hope the ache spreads to the world๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

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  11. Three years!! Wow! Congrats! ๐ŸŽ‰

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    1. Thank you for the kind words

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  12. Superb!! I just have no words! You are brilliant!!

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  13. Youโ€™re welcome ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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